I typed this into my phone's notepad on a train at 5am, and I'm recording it for my own amusement. Please don't feel that you must suffer through it. I did actually feel more tired after typing it, and fell asleep shortly after.
5am and i'm wide awake.
Slept about a wink on this swaying train.
Woman in her middle age beside me.
Stranger's shoulder, tempting pillow.
If i pretend i'm already sleeping...
How familiar will a stranger be?
Will writing this tire me
Enough to sleep?
A beautiful, elusive necessity.
The family, sex, great coffee.
Three things two wonderful four me.
Five firemen filet frostbitten fingers.
Fools!
1 comment:
haha i like it. not entirely sure what you were going for, but part of that might just be the 5am bit.
and those last three lines were great.
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